- From: Tom Hume <Tom.Hume@futureplatforms.com>
- Date: Wed, 10 Sep 2008 00:26:08 +0100
- To: public-bpwg-ct <public-bpwg-ct@w3.org>
LC-2012 refers to an introductory sentence being overly complex: "From the point of view of this document, Content Transformation is the manipulation in various ways, by proxies, of requests made to and content delivered by an origin server with a view to making it more suitable for mobile presentation." If there's a consensus that this is difficult to understand, could I suggest as an alternative: "Within this document content transformation refers to the manipulation of requests made to, and content delivered by, an origin server. This manipulation is carried out by proxies with a view to making content delivered more suitable for mobile presentation." -- Future Platforms Ltd e: Tom.Hume@futureplatforms.com t: +44 (0) 1273 819038 m: +44 (0) 7971 781422 company: www.futureplatforms.com personal: tomhume.org
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