- From: Anne van Kesteren <annevk@opera.com>
- Date: Wed, 16 Jan 2008 22:36:16 +0100
- To: "Ian Hickson" <ian@hixie.ch>, "David Orchard" <dorchard@bea.com>
- Cc: "WAF WG (public)" <public-appformats@w3.org>
On Wed, 16 Jan 2008 22:17:09 +0100, Ian Hickson <ian@hixie.ch> wrote: > On Wed, 16 Jan 2008, David Orchard wrote: >> Further, the current English style has problems. I find text like "If >> the item list has no next list item go to the next step in the overall >> set of steps. " to be very confusing. > > I think it's fine to point out confusing sentences to the editor to have > them be clarified. I agree that a comma and the word "then" in the above > sentence would make it easier to read. Thanks. English is not my native language so all such comments are very much appreciated. Fixed all instances I could find. -- Anne van Kesteren <http://annevankesteren.nl/> <http://www.opera.com/>
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