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Re: Access-Control: Proposed restructuring

From: Anne van Kesteren <annevk@opera.com>
Date: Wed, 16 Jan 2008 22:36:16 +0100
To: "Ian Hickson" <ian@hixie.ch>, "David Orchard" <dorchard@bea.com>
Cc: "WAF WG (public)" <public-appformats@w3.org>
Message-ID: <op.t41kyqzo64w2qv@annevk-t60.oslo.opera.com>

On Wed, 16 Jan 2008 22:17:09 +0100, Ian Hickson <ian@hixie.ch> wrote:
> On Wed, 16 Jan 2008, David Orchard wrote:
>> Further, the current English style has problems.  I find text like "If
>> the item list has no next list item go to the next step in the overall
>> set of steps. " to be very confusing.
>
> I think it's fine to point out confusing sentences to the editor to have
> them be clarified. I agree that a comma and the word "then" in the above
> sentence would make it easier to read.

Thanks. English is not my native language so all such comments are very  
much appreciated. Fixed all instances I could find.


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