- From: Ivan Herman <ivan@w3.org>
- Date: Tue, 18 Nov 2014 13:33:26 +0100
- To: Frederick Hirsch <w3c@fjhirsch.com>
- Cc: W3C Public Annotation List <public-annotation@w3.org>
Editorial comments: - at the moment, the way one chooses between a json-ld or a turtle syntax in the example is simply by moving the cursor on the label, instead of explicitly clicking on them. I think this is a fairly disturbing behaviour, people may suddenly see a syntax they may not even be familiar with... Can we change this? - In Section 4.4.1, the text says: "And the Specific Resource (spres1) to be styled would have the property in the Annotation's RDF" with an example in turtle. I believe this is a leftover. This is one of the two occurrences of the string "RDF" in the current text. The text will not be understandable for somebody coming from outside the RDF world, and not using the turtle syntax. Should be changed a bit. - Section 4.1, "The Specifier's description MAY be conveyed as an external or embedded resource, or as RDF properties within the graph": the reference to "RDF Properties" may again be difficult to understand for outsiders of RDF. This should also be rephrased. These are all editorial comments, though, and we all know that a FPWD will still evolve, so +1 on publication in any case. Ivan > On 17 Nov 2014, at 15:35 , Frederick Hirsch <w3c@fjhirsch.com> wrote: > > This is a Call for Consensus (CfC) to publish a First Public Working Draft (FPWD) of the ‘Web Annotation Data Model’ produced by the Annotation Working Group, and adopting the short name of “annotation-model” for this specification [1] > > The publication draft is here: http://w3c.github.io/web-annotation/model_fpwd/static.html > > Please review and note any concerns on the public list ( public-annotation @ w3.org ). This CfC ends in two weeks, Tuesday 2 December 2014. > > Please note that a FPWD is just that, a first public draft, so it need not be perfect and subsequent change is possible; publishing this draft should give it further review and attention. > > Please respond to this CfC (even a +1 is useful). Silence will be considered agreement. The anticipated publication date is 14 December. > > Thanks > > regards, Frederick and Rob > > Frederick Hirsch, Nokia > Rob Sanderson, Stanford > Co-Chairs W3C Web Annotation WG > > [1] please note those on the teleconference 12 November agreed to this short name: http://www.w3.org/2014/11/12-annotation-minutes.html#item04 > > > ---- Ivan Herman, W3C Digital Publishing Activity Lead Home: http://www.w3.org/People/Ivan/ mobile: +31-641044153 ORCID ID: http://orcid.org/0000-0003-0782-2704
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