Re: AD Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-h3-02

Thanks Mike, that looks good. Please go ahead and submit a new version, so I can start the IETF LC.

Francesca

From: Mike Bishop <mbishop@evequefou.be>
Date: Friday, 20 January 2023 at 22:04
To: Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>, draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-h3@ietf.org <draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-h3@ietf.org>, HTTP Working Group <ietf-http-wg@w3.org>
Subject: RE: AD Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-h3-02
Hi, Francesca –

https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/pull/2373<https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=31323334-501d5122-313273af-454445555731-3ca47534bf66fca7&q=1&e=74a3121d-39eb-4944-9b25-99318e0d3952&u=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fhttpwg%2Fhttp-extensions%2Fpull%2F2373> adds a Notational Convention section, containing the BCP 14 boilerplate and the ref to the language used in the frame layout diagrams.  If that meets with your approval, I’ll publish a new draft for the IESG.

From: Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>
Sent: Friday, January 13, 2023 5:20 AM
To: draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-h3@ietf.org; HTTP Working Group <ietf-http-wg@w3.org>
Subject: AD Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-h3-02

# AD Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-h3-02

cc @fpalombini

Thank you for this short document.

No comments on my side, however I would ask you to fix the boilerplate before starting IETF Last Call, so you won't have every directorate reviewer commenting on it (yes, I did note Mark wrote in the shepherd writeup that it was noted and it would be fixed after LC, I do think it is worth fixing before).

Francesca

## Discuss

### BCP 14

BCP 14 boilerplate is missing.

## Notes

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