Re: AD Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-h3-02

Thanks Mike, that looks good. Please go ahead and submit a new version, so I can start the IETF LC.


From: Mike Bishop <>
Date: Friday, 20 January 2023 at 22:04
To: Francesca Palombini <>, <>, HTTP Working Group <>
Subject: RE: AD Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-h3-02
Hi, Francesca<> adds a Notational Convention section, containing the BCP 14 boilerplate and the ref to the language used in the frame layout diagrams.  If that meets with your approval, Ill publish a new draft for the IESG.

From: Francesca Palombini <>
Sent: Friday, January 13, 2023 5:20 AM
To:; HTTP Working Group <>
Subject: AD Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-h3-02

# AD Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-h3-02

cc @fpalombini

Thank you for this short document.

No comments on my side, however I would ask you to fix the boilerplate before starting IETF Last Call, so you won't have every directorate reviewer commenting on it (yes, I did note Mark wrote in the shepherd writeup that it was noted and it would be fixed after LC, I do think it is worth fixing before).


## Discuss

### BCP 14

BCP 14 boilerplate is missing.

## Notes

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