Hi, Francesca - https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/pull/2373 adds a Notational Convention section, containing the BCP 14 boilerplate and the ref to the language used in the frame layout diagrams. If that meets with your approval, I'll publish a new draft for the IESG. From: Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com> Sent: Friday, January 13, 2023 5:20 AM To: draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-h3@ietf.org; HTTP Working Group <ietf-http-wg@w3.org> Subject: AD Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-h3-02 # AD Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-h3-02 cc @fpalombini Thank you for this short document. No comments on my side, however I would ask you to fix the boilerplate before starting IETF Last Call, so you won't have every directorate reviewer commenting on it (yes, I did note Mark wrote in the shepherd writeup that it was noted and it would be fixed after LC, I do think it is worth fixing before). Francesca ## Discuss ### BCP 14 BCP 14 boilerplate is missing. ## Notes This review is in the ["IETF Comments" Markdown format][ICMF], You can use the [`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into individual GitHub issues. [ICMF]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md [ICT]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments
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