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RE: AD Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-h3-02

From: Mike Bishop <mbishop@evequefou.be>
Date: Fri, 20 Jan 2023 21:03:04 +0000
To: Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>, "draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-h3@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-h3@ietf.org>, HTTP Working Group <ietf-http-wg@w3.org>
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Hi, Francesca -

https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/pull/2373 adds a Notational Convention section, containing the BCP 14 boilerplate and the ref to the language used in the frame layout diagrams.  If that meets with your approval, I'll publish a new draft for the IESG.

From: Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>
Sent: Friday, January 13, 2023 5:20 AM
To: draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-h3@ietf.org; HTTP Working Group <ietf-http-wg@w3.org>
Subject: AD Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-h3-02

# AD Review of draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-h3-02

cc @fpalombini

Thank you for this short document.

No comments on my side, however I would ask you to fix the boilerplate before starting IETF Last Call, so you won't have every directorate reviewer commenting on it (yes, I did note Mark wrote in the shepherd writeup that it was noted and it would be fixed after LC, I do think it is worth fixing before).


## Discuss

### BCP 14

BCP 14 boilerplate is missing.

## Notes

This review is in the ["IETF Comments" Markdown format][ICMF], You can use the
[`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into
individual GitHub issues.

[ICMF]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md
[ICT]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments
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