- From: Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>
- Date: Thu, 12 Aug 2021 15:14:01 +1000
- To: Murray Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>
- Cc: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, httpbis-chairs@ietf.org, HTTP Working Group <ietf-http-wg@w3.org>, Tommy Pauly <tpauly@apple.com>
> On 12 Aug 2021, at 3:13 pm, Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net> wrote: > > Hey Adam, Adam? Murray... too many ADs over the years. Sorry. > > Thanks for the feedback. Response below. > >> On 12 Aug 2021, at 2:55 pm, Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote: >> >> A suggestion in Section 2: >> >> OLD: >> The Cache-Status HTTP response header field indicates caches' >> handling of the request corresponding to the response it occurs >> within. >> NEW: >> The Cache-Status HTTP response header field indicates caches' >> handling of the request corresponding to the response within which >> it occurs. > > Both are simultaneously grammatical and unwieldy. I've gone in a slightly different direction: > https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/commit/3907e7e328 > > Cheers, > -- Mark Nottingham https://www.mnot.net/
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