- From: Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>
- Date: Fri, 26 Feb 2016 12:01:35 +1100
- To: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
- Cc: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-httpbis-alt-svc@ietf.org, Mike Bishop <michael.bishop@microsoft.com>, httpbis-chairs@ietf.org, ietf-http-wg@w3.org
Hi Alissa, > On 26 Feb 2016, at 10:55 AM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote: > > Couple of places where the language used was confusing for me: > > = Sec 2.4 = > > s/it can be used until the alternative connection is established./the > existing connection can be used until the alternative connection is > established./ That would make it: The client does not need to block requests on any existing connection; the existing connection can be used until the alternative connection is established. ... which is a bit repetitive. How about: The client does not need to block requests on the existing connection(s), which can be used until the alternative connection is established. > = Sec 3.1 = > > OLD > Unknown parameters MUST be ignored, that is > the values (alt-value) they appear in MUST be processed as if the > unknown parameter was not present. > > NEW > Unknown parameters MUST be ignored. That is, > the values (alt-value) in which they appear MUST be processed as if > the > unknown parameters were not present. https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/commit/de90f7fe1a7e360 Thanks! -- Mark Nottingham https://www.mnot.net/
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