- From: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>
- Date: Wed, 27 Aug 2008 21:50:04 +0200
- To: Brian Smith <brian@briansmith.org>
- CC: ietf-http-wg@w3.org
Brian Smith wrote: > Julian, > > The abstract of part 1 says that part 1 defines the HTTPS scheme, but > Section 3.2.2 says that another document defines it. I don't know how to > reword things to make it non-contradictory--maybe just take out "and HTTPS" > from the abstract? Yes, I noticed that as well. As long as we do not define HTTPS we probably should take it out. > Section 3.2.2 is titled "http URL". Because of the added reference to RFC > 2818 for HTTPS, a new title would be better. I recommend "The HTTP and HTTPS > URI Schemes," to match the text in the abstract of part 1. Also, the > paragraph that says 'The "https" scheme is defined in [RFC2818].' would be > better off without the "Note:" prefix, since "Note:" doesn't actually mean > anything. Hm, no. The section now mentions https, but that's it. I don't think that merits renaming it. The "Note:" prefix matches other parts of the specs where we want to make clear that this is just a note, not part of the normative text. I think this applies here as well. BR, Julian
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