- From: Koen Holtman <koen@win.tue.nl>
- Date: Thu, 30 May 1996 09:30:04 +0200 (MET DST)
- To: Balint Nagy Endre <bne@carenet.hu>
- Cc: rst@ai.mit.edu, http-wg%cuckoo.hpl.hp.com@hplb.hpl.hp.com
Balint Nagy Endre: > >Rober S. Tau: >> My fairly quick read of the document thus far has left me with a few >> more minor quibbles. The definition of "variant" in section 1.3 is a >> bit confusing --- the current text is: >> >> Each representation of that resource that corresponds to a different >> sequence of entities that could be returned for a requested resource >> is termed a variant. >A was lost in that much thats, too. I can't parse that text either. >> This had me scratching my head for a bit (starting with "which >> resource?") --- perhaps something like: >> >> If multiple representations could be returned for a single requested >> resource, each such representation is termed a variant of that resource. >> >> is simpler. (Then again, perhaps it seems simpler to me because that's >> the one which I wrote). >And clear at first look even for me. I also believe this rewrite is a correct description of the intended meaning. >Andrew. (Endre Balint Nagy) <bne@bne.ind.eunet.hu> Koen.
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