- From: Balint Nagy Endre <bne@carenet.hu>
- Date: Thu, 30 May 1996 05:11:11 +0200 (MET DST)
- To: "Robert S. Thau" <rst@ai.mit.edu>
- Cc: http WG <http-wg%cuckoo.hpl.hp.com@hplb.hpl.hp.com>
Rober S. Tau: > My fairly quick read of the document thus far has left me with a few > more minor quibbles. The definition of "variant" in section 1.3 is a > bit confusing --- the current text is: > > Each representation of that resource that corresponds to a different > sequence of entities that could be returned for a requested resource > is termed a variant. A was lost in that much thats, too. > This had me scratching my head for a bit (starting with "which > resource?") --- perhaps something like: > > If multiple representations could be returned for a single requested > resource, each such representation is termed a variant of that resource. > > is simpler. (Then again, perhaps it seems simpler to me because that's > the one which I wrote). And clear at first look even for me. Andrew. (Endre Balint Nagy) <bne@bne.ind.eunet.hu>
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