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Re: Proposed revised wording of 6.3 preamble

From: <Noah_Mendelsohn@lotus.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Dec 2000 09:16:03 -0500
To: "Martin Gudgin" <marting@develop.com>
Cc: xml-dist-app@w3.org
Message-ID: <OFCC05ABE5.E582E978-ON852569BD.004EF169@lotus.com>
Thanks for doing this.  On the whole this looks good, but I must say that 
I find the terms "in front of" and "behind each" to be somewhat ambiguous 
as to what really happens first (though you can easily guess) and perhaps 
too informal.  Thanks again.

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"Martin Gudgin" <marting@develop.com>
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12/21/00 11:15 PM

 
        To:     "XML Protocol Comments" <xml-dist-app@w3.org>
        cc:     (bcc: Noah Mendelsohn/CAM/Lotus)
        Subject:        Proposed revised wording of 6.3 preamble

Existing wording

The XML Protocol message path model is defined in terms of XP senders and 
XP
receivers who can generate and accept XP messages respectively. Behind 
each
XP receiver is an XP processor that processes the message according to the
rules of the XML Protocol.


Proposed new wording

The XML Protocol message path model is defined in terms of XP senders and
receivers which send and receive XP messages respectively. In front of 
each
XP sender is an XP processor which generates a message according to the
rules of the XML protocol. Behind each XP receiver is an XP processor that
processes the message according to the rules of the XML Protocol.


Gudge
Received on Friday, 22 December 2000 09:25:13 GMT

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