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Proposed revised wording of 6.3 preamble

From: Martin Gudgin <marting@develop.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Dec 2000 04:15:11 -0000
Message-ID: <020c01c06bcd$c7ec1720$0400a8c0@develop.com>
To: "XML Protocol Comments" <xml-dist-app@w3.org>
Existing wording

The XML Protocol message path model is defined in terms of XP senders and XP
receivers who can generate and accept XP messages respectively. Behind each
XP receiver is an XP processor that processes the message according to the
rules of the XML Protocol.


Proposed new wording

The XML Protocol message path model is defined in terms of XP senders and
receivers which send and receive XP messages respectively. In front of each
XP sender is an XP processor which generates a message according to the
rules of the XML protocol. Behind each XP receiver is an XP processor that
processes the message according to the rules of the XML Protocol.


Gudge
Received on Thursday, 21 December 2000 23:15:59 GMT

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