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Re: [css3-namespace] Editorial

From: Karl Dubost <karl@w3.org>
Date: Thu, 7 Feb 2008 09:12:31 +0900
Cc: www-style@w3.org
Message-Id: <D826A02F-12AD-4474-9801-DCC2942F058C@w3.org>
To: fantasai <fantasai.lists@inkedblade.net>


Le 7 févr. 2008 à 07:13, fantasai a écrit :
> karl@w3.org wrote:
>> Hi,
>> This is a QA Review comment for "CSS Module: Namespaces"
>> http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-css3-namespace-20060828/
>> 2006-08-28
>> 2nd WD
>> # References
>> 	[[[
>> 	The terminology used in this specification is that of [XML-NAMES11].
>> 	]]]
>> 	
>> Check references in the document and write proper English  
>> sentences. For
>> example, the previous sentence could be written.
>> 	"CSS Module: Namespaces" uses the terminology defined in "Namespaces
>> in XML 1.1". [XML-NAMES11].
>
> Rewritten as
>
> # Besides terms introduced by this specification, CSS Namespaces  
> uses the
> # terminology defined in Namespaces in XML 1.0. [[!REC-XML-NAMES]]
>
> Let me know if this addresses your comment.

Yes It does address my comment.
Thanks

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