- From: Karl Dubost <karl@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 7 Feb 2008 09:11:19 +0900
- To: fantasai <fantasai.lists@inkedblade.net>
- Cc: www-style@w3.org
Le 7 févr. 2008 à 07:04, fantasai a écrit : > karl@w3.org wrote: >> Hi, >> This is a QA Review comment for "CSS Module: Namespaces" >> http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-css3-namespace-20060828/ >> 2006-08-28 >> 2nd WD >> About http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-css3-namespace-20060828/ >> # This specification, This document, etc. to start a sentence >> [[[ >> This specification defines the syntax for using namespaces in CSS. >> ]]] >> Avoid using "this specification", but talk directly about the >> technology, >> it is always lighter for the reader. For example, "CSS Module: >> Namespaces" defines the syntax for using XML namespaces in CSS. …" > > I don't think it is always lighter, so I haven't changed all > occurrences. > But I changed most. :) > > http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css3-namespace/ > > Let me know if this address your comment. It does address my comment. Thanks. -- Karl Dubost - W3C http://www.w3.org/QA/ Be Strict To Be Cool
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