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Re: [css3-namespace] Editorial

From: Karl Dubost <karl@w3.org>
Date: Thu, 7 Feb 2008 09:11:19 +0900
Cc: www-style@w3.org
Message-Id: <DAA6E6D1-5C58-4AB6-AA8F-D18C42A4CEF4@w3.org>
To: fantasai <fantasai.lists@inkedblade.net>


Le 7 févr. 2008 à 07:04, fantasai a écrit :
> karl@w3.org wrote:
>> Hi,
>> This is a QA Review comment for "CSS Module: Namespaces"
>> http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-css3-namespace-20060828/
>> 2006-08-28
>> 2nd WD
>> About http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-css3-namespace-20060828/
>> # This specification, This document, etc. to start a sentence
>> 	[[[
>> 	This specification defines the syntax for using namespaces in CSS.
>> 	]]]
>> Avoid using "this specification", but talk directly about the  
>> technology,
>> it is always lighter for the reader. For example, 	"CSS Module:  
>> Namespaces" defines the syntax for using 	XML namespaces in CSS. …"
>
> I don't think it is always lighter, so I haven't changed all  
> occurrences.
> But I changed most. :)
>
>  http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css3-namespace/
>
> Let me know if this address your comment.


It does address my comment.
Thanks.

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Received on Thursday, 7 February 2008 00:11:29 GMT

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