Re: [css3-namespace] Editorial

• From: fantasai <fantasai.lists@inkedblade.net>
• Date: Wed, 06 Feb 2008 14:13:32 -0800
• To: karl@w3.org
• CC: www-style@w3.org
• Message-ID: <47AA310C.9010305@inkedblade.net>

karl@w3.org wrote:
> Hi,
> This is a QA Review comment for "CSS Module: Namespaces"
> http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-css3-namespace-20060828/
> 2006-08-28
> 2nd WD
> 
> # References
> 
>  [[[
>  The terminology used in this specification is that of [XML-NAMES11].
>  ]]]
>  
> Check references in the document and write proper English sentences. For
>  example, the previous sentence could be written.
>  "CSS Module: Namespaces" uses the terminology defined in "Namespaces
> in XML 1.1". [XML-NAMES11].

Rewritten as

  # Besides terms introduced by this specification, CSS Namespaces uses the
  # terminology defined in Namespaces in XML 1.0. [[!REC-XML-NAMES]]

Let me know if this addresses your comment.

~fantasai

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