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Re: [css3-namespace] Editorial

From: fantasai <fantasai.lists@inkedblade.net>
Date: Wed, 06 Feb 2008 14:04:24 -0800
Message-ID: <47AA2EE8.8080607@inkedblade.net>
To: karl@w3.org
CC: www-style@w3.org

karl@w3.org wrote:
> Hi,
> This is a QA Review comment for "CSS Module: Namespaces"
> http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-css3-namespace-20060828/
> 2006-08-28
> 2nd WD
> 
> About http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-css3-namespace-20060828/
> 
> # This specification, This document, etc. to start a sentence
> 	[[[
> 	This specification defines the syntax for using namespaces in CSS.
> 	]]]
> 
> Avoid using "this specification", but talk directly about the technology,
> it is always lighter for the reader. For example, 
> 	"CSS Module: Namespaces" defines the syntax for using 
> 	XML namespaces in CSS. …"

I don't think it is always lighter, so I haven't changed all occurrences.
But I changed most. :)

   http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css3-namespace/

Let me know if this address your comment.

~fantasai
Received on Wednesday, 6 February 2008 22:04:44 GMT

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