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Re: [css3-reader] Editorial suggestions

From: Bert Bos <bert@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 6 Aug 2004 20:03:27 +0200
Message-ID: <16659.51183.100556.778059@lanalana.inria.fr>
To: Etan Wexler <ewexler@stickdog.com>
Cc: www-style@w3.org

Etan Wexler writes:
> 
> Following are comments on the draft "The CSS 'Reader' Media Type" 
> (<http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/WD-css3-reader-20040224>).
> 
> 
> 
> In General
> 
> 
> The draft suffers from the URI-in-your-face idiom described by Susan 
> Lesch in the W3C Manual of Style 
> (<http://www.w3.org/2001/06/manual/#ref-section>). The suffering is 
> worst in the references, but apparent elsewhere.

The only visible URLs I could find were in the required places ("this
version," status and bibliography). Did I miss any?
 
> 2. Introduction 
> (<http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/WD-css3-reader-20040224/#intro>)
> 
> 
>  From the second example:
> 
>      <?xml-stylesheet href="style1.css" type="text/css"
>        media="screen and (color) and (max-width: 400px"?>
> 
> The malformed expression "(max-width: 400px" needs an ending 
> parenthesis.
>
>      <?xml-stylesheet href="style2.css" type="text/css"
>        media="reader and (max-device-ratio: 1/1)"?>
> 
> The feature "max-device-ratio" is not defined. It needs to be 
> "max-device-aspect-ratio".

Thanks, I'll fix these errors (in the internal draft for now).


Bert
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