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[css3-reader] Editorial suggestions

From: Etan Wexler <ewexler@stickdog.com>
Date: Thu, 5 Aug 2004 14:47:59 -0700
To: www-style@w3.org
Message-Id: <1E1FB369-E729-11D8-AD43-000502CB1B77@stickdog.com>

Following are comments on the draft "The CSS 'Reader' Media Type" 
(<http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/WD-css3-reader-20040224>).



In General


The draft suffers from the URI-in-your-face idiom described by Susan 
Lesch in the W3C Manual of Style 
(<http://www.w3.org/2001/06/manual/#ref-section>). The suffering is 
worst in the references, but apparent elsewhere.



2. Introduction 
(<http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/WD-css3-reader-20040224/#intro>)


 From the second example:

     <?xml-stylesheet href="style1.css" type="text/css"
       media="screen and (color) and (max-width: 400px"?>

The malformed expression "(max-width: 400px" needs an ending 
parenthesis.

     <?xml-stylesheet href="style2.css" type="text/css"
       media="reader and (max-device-ratio: 1/1)"?>

The feature "max-device-ratio" is not defined. It needs to be 
"max-device-aspect-ratio".



-- 
Etan Wexler.
Received on Thursday, 5 August 2004 17:49:45 GMT

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