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Re: rdf11-concepts WD ready

From: Pat Hayes <phayes@ihmc.us>
Date: Tue, 29 May 2012 20:40:07 -0500
Cc: Richard Cyganiak <richard@cyganiak.de>, RDF Working Group WG <public-rdf-wg@w3.org>
Message-Id: <AFB1F314-FFE3-4DDA-97F0-6D3D3AC1BCF5@ihmc.us>
To: Gavin Carothers <gavin@carothers.name>

On May 29, 2012, at 7:02 PM, Gavin Carothers wrote:

> On Tue, May 29, 2012 at 3:34 PM, Richard Cyganiak <richard@cyganiak.de> wrote:
>> In case anyone wants to have a last-minute check of the RDF Concepts draft before it goes out for publication:
>> http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/rdf/raw-file/rdf-concepts-WD2/rdf-concepts/index.html
> 
> Oooh, my turn!
> 
> There are sections like
> http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/rdf/raw-file/rdf-concepts-WD2/rdf-concepts/index.html#section-IRIs
> which seem to completely overwhelm their content with notes. Any time
> a note immediately follows a note there is likely room for
> improvement. Also the text doesn't seem to go a whole subsection
> without another note. Doesn't really need to be addressed before a new
> WD is published.
> 
> Graph isomorphism seems an odd (poor) choice of the first thing
> mentioned in the 3 RDF Graphs section. Should likely come after
> defining a blank node or it's not going to make any sense.

+1. I should have noticed this myself.

Pat

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