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Re: prov-overview for review for fpwd (ISSUE-605)

From: Ivan Herman <ivan@w3.org>
Date: Thu, 29 Nov 2012 11:20:40 -0500
Cc: Provenance Working Group WG <public-prov-wg@w3.org>
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To: Paul Groth <p.t.groth@vu.nl>
Paul,

Thanks!

small comments:

- the header 'PROV family of documents' appears twice
- in the list of documents, the first item should say (this document) instead having a circular reference
- In section 1: 'This instantiated by various serializations' -> 'This is instantiated by various serializations'
- In section 1: 'To help developers and user create valid provenance' -> 'To help developers and users to create valid provenance'
- Section 1: refers to the various blocks in the figure, but it does not say anything about 'PROV-LINKS'.
- The figure is a matter of taste, of course. But I usually look at these figures as, sort of, stacks; for me the figure suggests that the PROV-DM is based on the PROV-DC document. I would probably try to move these somehow on the left side, and leave the PROV-DM block as the base.
- The remark on Prov-O: "This is intended for the Linked Data and Semantic Web community and is useful for developers wishing to create RDFa mark-up." Did you mean 'RDF mark-up'? I do not think that a restriction on RDFa is necessary or useful here...
- I am not sure the term 'Roadmap' is the right one for the header of section 2. 'available documents'? 
- In the final version would it be worth making a reference to implementations/tools? A possibility is to link to 

http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/wiki/PROV

in case you guys fill this with your tools, that is:-) Alternatively, the implementation report may be used as well.


As for your questions below:


On Nov 27, 2012, at 09:51 , Paul Groth wrote:

> Dear all,

> Questions for the reviewers:
> - Can this document be released as FPWD?

Absolutely. Yes

> - If not, what are the blocking issues?
> - If yes, are there other issues to work on?

See my comments above. I do not consider them as blocking.

Ivan

> 
> The aim is to vote on FPWD release at the teleconference on Thursday.
> Can you please confirm you can review the document ahead of the call?

I think I am late with it, I do this at the airport of San Jose, and it is still early... But I hope it is helpful nevertheless!

ivan



> 
> Thanks,
> Paul
> 
> [1] https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/overview/overview.html
> [2] https://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/605
> 
> -- 
> --
> Dr. Paul Groth (p.t.groth@vu.nl)
> http://www.few.vu.nl/~pgroth/
> Assistant Professor
> - Knowledge Representation & Reasoning Group | 
>   Artificial Intelligence Section | Department of Computer Science
> - The Network Institute
> VU University Amsterdam


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