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comments on the latest editor's draft of Media Fragments URI 1.0

From: Thierry MICHEL <tmichel@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 05 Oct 2011 11:50:17 +0200
Message-ID: <4E8C2859.4050608@w3.org>
To: RaphaŽl Troncy <Raphael.Troncy@cwi.nl>, Media Fragment <public-media-fragment@w3.org>
Raphael,

Looking at the latest editor's draft of Media Fragments URI 1.0
W3C Working Draft 05 October 2011
http://www.w3.org/2008/WebVideo/Fragments/WD-media-fragments-spec/


1- The SOTD looks OK in general with following minor edits

* a small typo with " in [this specification to Recommendation" Status.]
* change wording  "which might be take out from this" --> "which might 
be removed from this"
* change wording "of the features described". "of the features at risk 
described" (at risk is the proper wording in the W3C for features which 
might not be implemented and be removed in PR).

There are also a few minors issues in the doc to be fixed.

1- There is one broken link:
Line: 112 
http://www.w3.org/2008/WebVideo/Fragments/WD-media-fragments-spec/ylafon@w3.org

and another which I guess will be resolve when you will publish the 
disposition of comments.
error Line: 156 
http://www.w3.org/2008/WebVideo/Fragments/WD-media-fragments-spec/comments-disposal.html

2- There are a few issues with pubrules validation [1]

* The syntax of a "This Version" URI MUST be 
<http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-shortname-2011MMDD/>.
Error (missing required trailing slash in 
http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-media-frags-20111005

* The syntax of a "Latest Version" URI MUST be 
<http://www.w3.org/TR/shortname/>.
Error (missing required trailing slash in http://www.w3.org/TR/media-frags;

* Error. Required boilerplate text not found.
Include this source code:
<p>Publication as a Working Draft does not imply endorsement by the W3C 
Membership. This is a draft document and may be updated, replaced or 
obsoleted by other documents at any time. It is inappropriate to cite 
this document as other than work in progress.</p>

* Error The Namespaces Checker (you can ignore that. It is OK)
* Error.  check that all resources are located in the correct 
directory.. (you can ignore that. It is OK.

*don't forget to change the "editor's draft logo" to the "CR logo"

Best,

thierry.


[1]


http://services.w3.org/xslt?xmlfile=http%3A%2F%2Fservices.w3.org%2Ftidy%2Ftidy%3FpassThroughXHTML%3D1%26docAddr%3Dhttp%253A%252F%252Fwww.w3.org%252F2008%252FWebVideo%252FFragments%252FWD-media-fragments-spec%252F&xslfile=http%3A%2F%2Fservices.w3.org%2Fxslt%3Fxmlfile%3Dhttp%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2005%2F07%2Fpubrules%253Fuimode%253Dchecker_full%2526year%253D2011%2526docstatus%253Dlc-wd-tr%2526rectrack%253Dyes%2526prevrec%253Dnone%2526patpol%253Dw3c%2526normative%253Dyes%2526uri%253Dhttp%25253A%25252F%25252Fwww.w3.org%25252F2008%25252FWebVideo%25252FFragments%25252FWD-media-fragments-spec%25252F%2526filterValues%253D%2526nscheckmanual%253D%2526display%253Dall%2526recursive%253Doff%2526recurse_auth%253Don%26xslfile%3Dhttp%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2005%2F09%2Fchecker%2Fframe.xsl%26display%3Dall%26recurse_auth%3Don&uimode=checker_full&filterValues=&year=2011&docstatus=lc-wd-tr&rectrack=yes&prevrec=none&patpol=w3c&normative=yes&doc_uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2008%2FWebVideo%2FFragmen
ts%2FWD-media-fragments-spec%2F&recursive=off&nscheckmanual=&display=all&recurse_auth=on
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