- From: Fabien Gandon <Fabien.Gandon@sophia.inria.fr>
- Date: Thu, 22 Feb 2007 09:47:55 +0100
- To: public-grddl-wg@w3.org
Clark, John a écrit : > Dan Connolly wrote: > >>> Clark, John: >>> >>>> 1. Introduction[1]: >>>> >>>> * "There are many dialects in practice among the many XML >>>> documents on the >>>> web." >>>> -> >>>> "There exist many dialects of XML in use by documents >>>> >> on the web." >> >>>> >>>> >>> Done. >>> >> Hmm... that seems overly stilted, to me. >> >> Note that this sentence also starts the main spec. I don't >> intend to change it. >> > > I was simply trying to clarify the original, which seemed a bit > confusing. Perhaps "There are many dialects of XML in use by documents > on the web." would be easier to read. > Ok. Changed in v 1.75 2007/02/21 16:32:07 http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/grddl-wg/doc43/scenario-gallery.htm > >>>> * "How, for example, does software discover the author >>>> >> of a poem, a >> >>>> spreadsheet and an ontology? And how can software >>>> >> determine whether >> >>>> authors of each are in fact the same person?" >>>> -> >>>> "How, for example, does software discover the author >>>> >> of a poem, a >> >>>> spreadsheet, or an ontology? And how can software >>>> >> determine whether >> >>>> any two of these authors are in fact the same person?" >>>> >>>> >>> Done. >>> >> That seems odd too; how can two authors be the same person? >> Two names might refer to the same people, but if the authors >> are the same, there's just one of them, not two. >> > > Perhaps the second question should be rephrased as "And how can software > determine whether any two of these authors in fact refer to the same > person?" Again, I was trying to clarify the original, here. > > >>>> * Is the RDF abstraction a "syntax"? I always thought >>>> >> of it as a >> >>>> "model". >>>> *shrugs* >>>> >>>> >>> I prefer model too. So changed to model. >>> >> Hmm... I'd avoid "model". >> Ok, *changed back* to "abstract syntax" and linked to RDF document in v 1.75 2007/02/21 16:32:07 http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/grddl-wg/doc43/scenario-gallery.htm -- Fabien - http://www-sop.inria.fr/acacia/fabien/
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