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From: Ronald P. Reck <rreck@rrecktek.com>
Date: Wed, 07 Feb 2007 10:55:39 -0500
Message-ID: <45C9F67B.40408@rrecktek.com>
To: public-grddl-wg@w3.org

http://www.w3.org/TR/grddl/

1.
current>The use cases document[usecases] collects a number of use cases
together with their goals and requirements for GRDDL.

rationale: my impression is that using both 'collect' and 'together' is
redundant.

change>The use cases document[usecases] collects a number of use cases
with their goals and requirements for GRDDL.


2.

current>XHTML provides the profile mechanism to link to the meaning of
properties and the set of legal values for those properties.

rationale: stylistic

change> XHTML provides the profile mechanism that link the meaning of
properties and the set of legal values for those properties.


3.

current> Those terms can then be used in an XHTML document to convey
profile-dependent meaning.

rationale: stylistic

change>Then, those terms can be used in an XHTML document to convey
profile-dependent meaning.
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