comments on spec

http://www.w3.org/TR/grddl/

1.
current>The use cases document[usecases] collects a number of use cases
together with their goals and requirements for GRDDL.

rationale: my impression is that using both 'collect' and 'together' is
redundant.

change>The use cases document[usecases] collects a number of use cases
with their goals and requirements for GRDDL.


2.

current>XHTML provides the profile mechanism to link to the meaning of
properties and the set of legal values for those properties.

rationale: stylistic

change> XHTML provides the profile mechanism that link the meaning of
properties and the set of legal values for those properties.


3.

current> Those terms can then be used in an XHTML document to convey
profile-dependent meaning.

rationale: stylistic

change>Then, those terms can be used in an XHTML document to convey
profile-dependent meaning.