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Re: comments on spec

From: Dan Connolly <connolly@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 16 Feb 2007 17:47:51 -0600
To: rreck@rrecktek.com
Cc: public-grddl-wg@w3.org
Message-Id: <1171669671.4165.46.camel@dirk>

On Wed, 2007-02-07 at 10:55 -0500, Ronald P. Reck wrote:
> http://www.w3.org/TR/grddl/
> 
> 1.
> current>The use cases document[usecases] collects a number of use cases
> together with their goals and requirements for GRDDL.
> 
> rationale: my impression is that using both 'collect' and 'together' is
> redundant.
> 
> change>The use cases document[usecases] collects a number of use cases
> with their goals and requirements for GRDDL.

yes, this is an improvement.
 http://www.w3.org/2004/01/rdxh/spec 
 1.217  2007/02/16 23:46:08

My sense of style differs from yours on the other two; I didn't make
those changes.

> 2.
> 
> current>XHTML provides the profile mechanism to link to the meaning of
> properties and the set of legal values for those properties.
> 
> rationale: stylistic
> 
> change> XHTML provides the profile mechanism that link the meaning of
> properties and the set of legal values for those properties.
> 
> 
> 3.
> 
> current> Those terms can then be used in an XHTML document to convey
> profile-dependent meaning.
> 
> rationale: stylistic
> 
> change>Then, those terms can be used in an XHTML document to convey
> profile-dependent meaning.
> 
> 
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