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Re: draft-kucherawy-httpbis-summary

From: Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 28 Mar 2012 06:27:17 +0200
Message-ID: <CABkgnnV4oKiHY=UGy2R9BsAhZJ+wO20Lq6Kv3ZGmEEc4kHv-mg@mail.gmail.com>
To: "Murray S. Kucherawy" <msk@cloudmark.com>
Cc: "ietf-http-wg@w3.org" <ietf-http-wg@w3.org>
On 28 March 2012 06:15, Murray S. Kucherawy <msk@cloudmark.com> wrote:
> How about "IANA actions in this document"?

I think that the concern is that you focus on IANA, when what your
users really care about is what _pieces_ of HTTP can be found in the
part in question.  Maybe something more like:

"[http-p1] describes these components/pieces/bits/things/stuff of HTTP:"
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