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RE: draft-kucherawy-httpbis-summary

From: Murray S. Kucherawy <msk@cloudmark.com>
Date: Wed, 28 Mar 2012 04:34:37 +0000
To: "ietf-http-wg@w3.org" <ietf-http-wg@w3.org>
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Martin Thomson [mailto:martin.thomson@gmail.com]
> Sent: Tuesday, March 27, 2012 9:27 PM
> To: Murray S. Kucherawy
> Cc: ietf-http-wg@w3.org
> Subject: Re: draft-kucherawy-httpbis-summary
> 
> On 28 March 2012 06:15, Murray S. Kucherawy <msk@cloudmark.com> wrote:
> > How about "IANA actions in this document"?
> 
> I think that the concern is that you focus on IANA, when what your
> users really care about is what _pieces_ of HTTP can be found in the
> part in question.  Maybe something more like:

Like so (pardon the XML):

                <t> This document summarizes the series of documents comprising
                    the definition of HTTP/1.1.  A synopsis of each document
                    is provided, as well as an enumeration of the key
                    definitions (and, thus, their corresponding IANA actions)
                    and security topics each one contains.  This is intended
                    to serve as a super table of contents for the series. </t>
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