- From: A. Vine <andrea.vine@Sun.COM>
- Date: Tue, 28 Sep 2004 18:48:57 -0700
- To: Yves Lafon <ylafon@w3.org>
- Cc: I18n WSTF <public-i18n-ws@w3.org>, xmlp-comments@w3.org
Dear Yves and the XMLPWG, I apologize but am unable to thoroughly review the CR version of the Resource Representation SOAP Header Block specification. However, in a quick glance I noticed that: occurences => occurrences (2 places) is still not fixed. Regards, Andrea Vine Sun Microsystems Yves Lafon wrote: > On Thu, 2 Sep 2004, A. Vine wrote: > > [issue 504 covers the "Basic edits" section of your email.] > > Everything has been corrected in the latest editor's draft [1]. It was > not possible to locate everything as you commented on a version that is > not the CR version [2]. > Can you verify the latest editor's copy [1]? > Thanks, > > [1] http://www.w3.org/2000/xp/Group/3/06/Attachments/Representation.html > [2] http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/CR-soap12-rep-20040826/ > >> Below are some basic edits: >> >> 2.1 Introduction >> ---------------- >> >> occurences => occurrences (2 places) >> several representation => several representations >> >> >> 2.2.1 rep:Representation element >> -------------------------------- >> >> "One or more attribute information items amongst its [attributes] >> property as follows:" >> => >> "One or more attribute information items amongst its [attributes] >> properties as follows:" >> (not clear as written, is it an "attributes property"? If so, it can't >> be "amongst" a single thing. Same comment for section 2.2.4) >> >> "One or more element information items in its [children] property in >> order as follows:" >> => >> "One or more element information items in its [children] properties in >> order as follows:" >> (not clear as written, is it a "children property"?) >> >> "with a [namespace name] different than" >> => >> "with a [namespace name] different from" >> >> >> 2.2.4 rep:Data element >> ---------------------- >> (Same comments as in 2.2.1) >> >> >> 2.3 Extensibility of the Representation header block >> ---------------------------------------------------- >> "several possible usage" => "several possible usages" >> >> >> 2.3.3 HTTP headers >> ------------------ >> "... all SOAP senders understand HTTP caching mechanism" >> ^the >> >> >> Regards, >> Andrea Vine >> W3C I18n WSTF >> > -- The trouble with the world is that the stupid are cocksure and the intelligent are full of doubt. -Bertrand Russell, philosopher, mathematician, author (1872-1970) [...shouldn't that end with "or maybe not?"]
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