- From: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
- Date: Sun, 26 Jan 2003 19:45:06 -0800
- To: xmlp-comments@w3.org
Hello, Here are just a few minor editorial comments for your "SOAP Version 1.2 Part 1: Messaging Framework" Candidate Recommendation [1]. In "XML schema," schema can be lowercase except when referring to the XML Schema Recommendation. In 1.5.1, s/SOAP Module/SOAP module/ The third sentence is too long: This section sets out the rules by which SOAP messages are processed. Unless otherwise stated, processing MUST be semantically equivalent to performing the following steps separately, and in the order given. Note however that nothing in this specification prevents the use of optimistic concurrency, roll back, or other techniques that might provide increased flexibility in processing order provided all generated SOAP messages, SOAP faults and application-level side effects are equivalent to those that would be obtained by direct implementation of the following rules in the order shown below. The para. could be something like (I may have this wrong): This section sets out the rules by which SOAP messages are processed. Nothing in this specification prevents the use of optimistic concurrency, roll back, or other techniques that might provide increased flexibility in processing order. Unless otherwise stated, processing of all generated SOAP messages, SOAP faults and application-level side effects MUST be semantically equivalent to performing the following steps separately, and in the order given. Generally, white space is two words. Does "Whitespace character information items" make more sense as "White space character information items"? I believe so (see http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#sec-common-syn). s/message exchange patterns/Message Exchange Pattern/ (or the reverse) s/does NOT require/does <strong>not</strong> require/ s/whitespace characters/white space characters/ s/SOAP 1.1/SOAP/1.1/ [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2002/CR-soap12-part1-20021219/ Best wishes for your project, -- Susan Lesch http://www.w3.org/People/Lesch/ mailto:lesch@w3.org tel:+1.858.483.4819 World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) http://www.w3.org/
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