- From: Bjoern Hoehrmann <derhoermi@gmx.net>
- Date: Mon, 15 Aug 2005 16:19:39 +0200
- To: jose.kahan@w3.org
- Cc: xml-encryption@w3.org
* Jose Kahan wrote: >[1] http://www.w3.org/2005/08/15-xmlencreg.html At a glance: The 'charset' parameter should be defined with reference to RFC 3023 such that its semantics and lexical space are clear. You have a reference to [XML-MIT], this should probably be [XML-MT] to match the entry in the list of references. s/#sec-Sign-with-Encrypt/#sec-Security/ I think the "Change controller" field is for change control over the media type registration, not for the XML Encryption specification. s/xml-encryption@3\.org/xml-encryption@w3.org/ For fragment identifiers it should point at least at the corresponding section in RFC 3023. "Applications which use this media type" could reference #def-Application in xmlenc-core instead. -- Björn Höhrmann · mailto:bjoern@hoehrmann.de · http://bjoern.hoehrmann.de Weinh. Str. 22 · Telefon: +49(0)621/4309674 · http://www.bjoernsworld.de 68309 Mannheim · PGP Pub. KeyID: 0xA4357E78 · http://www.websitedev.de/
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