Re: Data replacement from Takeshi Imamura on 2002-02-12 (xml-encryption@w3.org from February 2002)

From: Takeshi Imamura <IMAMU@jp.ibm.com>
Date: Wed, 13 Feb 2002 00:04:21 +0900
To: reagle@w3.org
Cc: xml-encryption@w3.org
Message-ID: <OFDDB1DF9A.470D9933-ON49256B5E.00502C02@LocalDomain>

>> How about "a document [XML, section 2.1]" instead of "an XML Information
>> Set"?  I think it is still confusing.
>
>I removed the compressed bit and now refer to an XML document. I also
>tweaked that text.

Thanks.  The text looks good to me.

Thanks,
Takeshi IMAMURA
Tokyo Research Laboratory
IBM Research
imamu@jp.ibm.com

Received on Tuesday, 12 February 2002 11:28:41 UTC