Re: XML Encryption spec

Frederick,

I reviewed your changes to the draft and got a few comments:

Section 3.2.1
The type of the <Transforms> element would not be ds:TransformsType but
enc:TransformsType.

Section 3.5
Your example is not appropriate because the XPath does not retrieve any
<EncryptedData> or <EncryptedKey> element.  It would be the one as:

<XPath xmlns:enc="http://www.w3.org/2001/04/xmlenc#">
  self::enc:EncryptedData[@Id="example1"]
</XPath>

Thanks,
Takeshi IMAMURA
Tokyo Research Laboratory
IBM Research
imamu@jp.ibm.com



From: "Frederick J. Hirsch" <hirsch@zolera.com>@w3.org on 2001/07/24 06:48
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Enclosed is an edit of the XML Encryption Draft June 26, with some spelling
and
wording changes.

I also added an example to secton 3.5.

I'm not sure how the namespace declaration for the repository in 3.2.1 has
any
impact, since it is not used - should it be removed?

Changes are marked using the .fjhcomment css stylesheet entry in the
document.

Received on Wednesday, 25 July 2001 07:22:03 UTC