[xml-model] Minor wording ambiguity from Tony Graham on 2011-03-29 (xml-editor@w3.org from April to June 2011)

From: Tony Graham <tgraham@mentea.net>
Date: Tue, 29 Mar 2011 15:40:57 +0100 (IST)
To: xml-editor@w3.org
Message-ID: <16457.87.232.94.112.1301409657.squirrel@mail3.webfaction.com>

In http://www.w3.org/TR/2010/NOTE-xml-model-20100415/ in the text:

   Documents must not use processing instruction information items with the
   [target] property xml-model if they are not xml-model processing
   instructions.

the "they" could refer to either "documents" or "processing instruction
information items".

Up until I read "xml-model processing instructions", I thought "they" were
documents.  I suggest changing this "they" to "the information items" in
any future edition.

Regards,


Tony Graham
Mentea.

Received on Monday, 4 April 2011 17:00:10 UTC