- From: Nilo Mitra (EUS) <Nilo.Mitra@am1.ericsson.se>
- Date: Tue, 13 May 2003 16:44:50 -0500
- To: "'Don Box'" <dbox@microsoft.com>, xml-dist-app@w3.org
Hi Don: Please see inlined response. > From: Don Box [mailto:dbox@microsoft.com] <snip> > In reading section 2.2 (and 2.2.1), the prose is so close to > perfect, but there's something about it that I wonder about. Thanks. (I assume this is a compliment ;-)) > > The section uses the term "XML document" to refer to the > body content of an envelope. > <snip> > Perhaps the primer could use the term "XML-based content" > instead of XML document? OK. There are three occurences of the phrase "XML document" in the referenced sections, and in each case your proposed suggestion fits well. I'll make the changes in the next version. Thanks for reading the Primer - again. > > DB > Nilo Nilo Mitra Ericsson, Inc. phone: + 1 212 843 8451 mobile: +1 516 476 7427 nilo.mitra@ericsson.com
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