- From: Jean-Jacques Moreau <moreau@crf.canon.fr>
- Date: Thu, 06 Jun 2002 15:35:11 +0200
- To: Christopher Ferris <chris.ferris@sun.com>
- CC: Henrik Frystyk Nielsen <henrikn@microsoft.com>, noah_mendelsohn@us.ibm.com, xml-dist-app@w3.org
LOL ! ... but I like it! (I just now hope noone will disagree!) Maybe a final minor tweak, mainly for consistency: s/SOAP receiving node/SOAP receiver/ Jean-Jacques. Christopher Ferris wrote: > Jean-Jacques, > > The SOAP processing model specifies[1] how a SOAP receiving node processes[2] a > ^^^^^^^^^ > SOAP message. It applies to a single message only, in isolation from > any other SOAP message. The SOAP processing model itself does not[3] > maintain any state or perform any correlation or coordination between > messages[4], even, for example, when used in combination with a feature > which involves sending multiple SOAP messages in sequence, each subsequent > message depending on the response to the previous message. It is the > responsibility of each such features to define such combined[5] > processing. > > How 'bout the one minor tweak. Again, this constitutes my main concern > in that SOAP process rules have nothing to say about what a SOAP sending > node does with the message. > > > [2] I like "processing" better than "receiving" here. I think it's up to > > the MEP to specify what happens when a message is received. IMO, the > > processing model is concerned by the processing of messages only, not by > > their reception. > > I think I disagree. SOAP has nothing to say about processing a SOAP > message as it is being sent, or am I missing something fundamental? > > Cheers? > > Chris > Jean-Jacques Moreau wrote: > > > > Close. How about the following minor tweaks: > > > > The SOAP processing model specifies[1] how a SOAP node processes[2] a > > SOAP message. It applies to a single message only, in isolation from any > > other SOAP message. The SOAP processing model itself does not[3] > > maintain any state or perform any correlation or coordination between > > messages[4], even, for example, when used in combination with a feature > > which involves sending multiple SOAP messages in sequence, each > > subsequent message depending on the response to the previous message. It > > is the responsibility of each such features to define such combined[5] > > processing. > > > > Jean-Jacques. > > > > [1] I don't remember whether there was any introductory context. In any > > case, I thought an extra introductory sentence was necessary. > > > > [2] I like "processing" better than "receiving" here. I think it's up to > > the MEP to specify what happens when a message is received. IMO, the > > processing model is concerned by the processing of messages only, not by > > their reception. > > > > [3] I think the active is more appropriate than the passive here. > > > > [4] "between messages" may not be necessary. > > > > [5] I am unuse of the adjective to use here. I think we need to say > > point out to features as being the place where you define such > > functionality; but maybe you will think this should go into the MEP > > section section? > > > >> So, with that, here is a slight tweak: > >> > >> The SOAP processing model applies to a SOAP node > >> receiving a single message only, in isolation > >> from any other SOAP message. There is no state, > >> correlation or coordination at the SOAP processing > >> model level, even, for example if using a feature > >> which involves sending multiple messages in > >> sequence, each subsequent message depending on > >> the response to the previous message. > >> > >> > > > >
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