[Bug 11390] Editorial: references to wrong sections

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=11390

--- Comment #1 from C. M. Sperberg-McQueen <cmsmcq@blackmesatech.com> 2011-01-12 04:05:58 UTC ---
Proposal:  delete the words "the last section of each of", so that the relevant
part of the sentence reads

    all the relevant Constraints on Schemas set out in 
    the subsections of Schema Component Details (§3)."

It may be comforting to some readers that all the top-level sub-sections of
section 3 have similar sub-structures, but they will derive that comfort even
if we do not rely on or talk about the parallel structures.

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Received on Wednesday, 12 January 2011 04:06:00 UTC