[Bug 11228] minor editorial improvement : definition of particles

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=11228

C. M. Sperberg-McQueen <cmsmcq@blackmesatech.com> changed:

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--- Comment #2 from C. M. Sperberg-McQueen <cmsmcq@blackmesatech.com> 2011-01-12 03:55:07 UTC ---

Proposal:  in section 3.9.2, replace the paragraph 

    Particles correspond to all three elements (<element> not
    immediately within <schema>, <group> not immediately within
    <schema> and <any>) which allow minOccurs and maxOccurs
    attributes. These in turn correspond to two components in each
    case, a particle and its {term}. The appropriate mapping is
    described in XML Representation of Element Declaration Schema
    Components (�3.3.2), XML Representation of Model Group Schema
    Components (�3.8.2) and XML Representation of Wildcard Schema
    Components (�3.10.2) respectively.

with the paragraph 

    Particles in the schema correspond to several different kinds of
    element information items that can bear minOccurs and maxOccurs
    attributes in the schema document:

      - Local <element>, see XML Representation of Element
        Declaration Schema Components (�3.3.2)

      - Model groups <all>, <sequence>, and <choice>, see XML
        Representation of Model Group Schema Components (�3.8.2)

      - Group references <group>, see XML Representation of Model
        Group Definition Schema Components (�3.7.2)

      - Wildcard <any>, see XML Representation of Wildcard Schema
        Components (�3.10.2)

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