[Bug 6201] New: Constraints on particles (3.9.6)

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=6201

           Summary: Constraints on particles (3.9.6)
           Product: XML Schema
           Version: 1.1 only
          Platform: PC
        OS/Version: Windows NT
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Structures: XSD Part 1
        AssignedTo: cmsmcq@w3.org
        ReportedBy: mike@saxonica.com
         QAContact: www-xml-schema-comments@w3.org


3.9.6 says "All particles (see Particles (§3.9)) must satisfy the following
constraints.". In fact, this is only true of the constraint in 3.9.6.1.
Subsections 3.9.6.2 and 3.9.6.3 should both start "The following constraint
[singular] defines a relation [singular] appealed to elsewhere in this
specification".

Personally, I would write "For a particle to be emptiable one or more of the
following is true:" as "A particle is emptiable if and only if one or more of
the following is true:" - but that's really in the realm of editorial
discretion.


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Received on Sunday, 2 November 2008 18:52:11 UTC