[Bug 5167] misc editorial

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=5167

           Summary: misc editorial
           Product: XML Schema
           Version: 1.1 only
          Platform: PC
        OS/Version: Windows XP
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Structures: XSD Part 1
        AssignedTo: cmsmcq@w3.org
        ReportedBy: johnarwe@us.ibm.com
         QAContact: www-xml-schema-comments@w3.org


3.17.2.2 References to Schema Components from Elsewhere
refer to xpointer scheme, which has been abandoned.
technically legal perhaps since the ref is not normative, but probably easy to
re-cast example to one of the "blessed" xptr schemes

G.1 Changes made since version 1.0, Complex type definitions (miscellaneous
changes)
from: "are now forbidded to have different values"
to:   "are now forbidden to have different values"

G.1 Changes made since version 1.0, Changes to element declarations:
"Introduction of a special ·xsd:error· for use in"
missing word after xsd:error - is it an error code, property, component, ...?

G.1 Changes made since version 1.0, The process of validation:
"lax assessment was optional and did not require the validation of [children]
or [attributes]."
should it be assessment of children or validation of attributes?

G.2 Issues not resolved
from: "it may be useful to mention Some points on which possible changes "
to:   "It may be useful to mention some points where    possible changes "

G.2 Issues not resolved
"edge cases remain which different conformant implementations will treat
differently."
list those known, or point to a list

G.2 Issues not resolved
"new system of error codes was originally foreseen for XSDL 1.1, but has not
been completed for inclusion here."
clarify if still intended or has been dumped in the Thames permanently

J Glossary (non-normative)
"valid
    the word valid and its derivatives are used to refer to clause 1 above, the
determination of local schema-validity"
- There is no clause 1 above in this context.
- looked for various combinations of local schema-validity, none in glossary

Received on Tuesday, 9 October 2007 13:16:13 UTC