[Bug 3963] Editorial work on "Attribute Locally Valid (Use)"

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3963

           Summary: Editorial work on "Attribute Locally Valid (Use)"
           Product: XML Schema
           Version: 1.1 only
          Platform: All
        OS/Version: All
            Status: NEW
          Keywords: editorial
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Structures: XSD Part 1
        AssignedTo: cmsmcq@w3.org
        ReportedBy: sandygao@ca.ibm.com
         QAContact: www-xml-schema-comments@w3.org


In schema 1.1 structures draft, the constraint "Attribute Locally Valid (Use)"
currently reads:

"The item's ·actual value· matches the {value} of the {value constraint}, if it
is present and its {variety} is fixed.

For an attribute information item to be·valid· with respect to an attribute use
its ·actual value· must be identical to the {value} of the attribute use's
{value constraint}, if it is present and has {variety} fixed."

where the first paragraph looks very suspecious.

And obviously a space is needed between "be" and "·valid·".

Received on Wednesday, 8 November 2006 21:23:48 UTC