[Bug 2242] R-250: 2E PER: Comments on rcase-MapAndSum

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=2242

           Summary: R-250: 2E PER: Comments on rcase-MapAndSum
           Product: XML Schema
           Version: 1.0
          Platform: All
        OS/Version: All
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: XSD Part 1: Structures
        AssignedTo: ht@w3.org
        ReportedBy: sandygao@ca.ibm.com
         QAContact: www-xml-schema-comments@w3.org


My comments relate to 

http://www.w3c.org/TR/2004/PER-xmlschema-1-20040318/#rcase-MapAndSum 

I'd like to request that rcase-MapAndSum.2 be rephrased to make it more 
readable. There are a number of places in the these documents that suffer the 
same sort of human-parseability problems but this sentence is particularly 
egregious. 

See the original email for details on the issues and suggested wording changes:
http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-xml-schema-comments/2004JanMar/0080.html

Received on Wednesday, 14 September 2005 19:41:23 UTC