minor typos in WD-xmlschema-2-20000407

These are a few possible minor typos in your Last Call draft, XML 
Schema Part 2: Datatypes [1] "work in progress." A section number is 
followed by a quote and then a suggestion.

In section 3, there are 17 occurrences of double spaces under various 
"Derived datatypes," for example, in 3.2.1.2. You could remove the 
 's or put the pair of terms on one line.
<a href="#dt-built-in">built-in</a>&nbsp;
<a href="#dt-derived">derived</a>

Status of this document - last par.
recommendation [twice]
Recommendation

2.1
c) a set of facets
[You might link to facet's definition the first time it is mentioned.]

2.4.1.4 par. 2
cardinality, there are
cardinality; there are
[or]
cardinality. There are

2.4.1.12 par. 2
octect
octet

3.2 par. 1
derived from this the datatype
derived from this datatype

3.2.7 par. 2
ocurrence
occurrence

3.3.4.2 has an empty list item.

3.3.5 par. 1
fininte-length
finite-length

3.3.6
The value space of Name the set
The value space of Name is the set

3.3.8.1
a lexical consisting of
a lexical representation consisting of

3.3.15
This results in is the
This results in the

3.3.24.1, 3.3.25.1, 3.3.26.1, and 3.3.27.1
and an preceding "-"
and a preceding "-"

4. par. 1
present, optional
present; optional

4.2.12 note
associated encoding.
associated with encoding.

5.1 table {variety}
or any of its any ancestor
[Sorry I didn't understand that phrase.]

5.1.2 par. 1
dataype
datatype

5.2 par. 1
specificing
[Not sure. Do you mean specifying?]

5.2.10 example
and only allow whole cents.
and only allows whole cents.
[assuming "application" is the subject of the sentence]

5.2.12 par. 1
is a encoding
is an encoding

5.2.13 example
Is "HMO" (Health Maintenance Organization) an internationally 
understood acronym? If not you might say "health insurance company."

A. and B. line 6 need closing parentheses followed by an ending 
period after "just in case". To be a little more formal, you could 
end the sentence after "entity expansions)."

A. lines 28 and 30
builtin
built-in

B. line 26
Customisation
Customization

E. note after table 3
it it logicall
it is logically

E.1 par. 11
chacters
characters

E.1.1 par. 4 and par. 8
compliment
complement

E.1.1 par. 8
Suppliment
Supplement

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2000/WD-xmlschema-2-20000407/

Best wishes for your project,
-- 
Susan Lesch
Intern, W3C

Received on Friday, 12 May 2000 06:15:44 UTC