- From: Jose Kahan <jose.kahan@w3.org>
- Date: Tue, 22 Mar 2005 13:08:02 +0100
- To: Shivaram Mysore <shivarammysore@yahoo.com>
- Cc: XKMS WG <www-xkms@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <20050322120802.GB4694@rakahanga.inrialpes.fr>
Hi Shivaram, Good work. I noticed these two: On Fri, Mar 18, 2005 at 03:35:37PM -0800, Shivaram Mysore wrote: > Issue 333-jk: Added Para [352a] Your text: <quote> When a client responds with a OPTIONAL element that is not supported by the Server, then, use ResultMajor=Sender and ResultMinor could have values like: OptionalElementNotSupported, Failure and MessageNotSupported </quote> I think that you forgot to add the OptionalElementNotSupported error code to the [122] table. Part of the [352a] text should be in the description too. For the [352a] text, I would propose the following change, as we had mention some kind of metadata file: <quote> When a client request includes an OPTIONAL element that is not supported by the Server, the server may use the ResultMajor Sender code and the ResultMinor OptionalElementNotSupported code. In some cases, depending on the context, the server may use the Failure and MessageNotSupported ResultMinor codes. In any of these cases, the client should check the server's supported features, for example by reading a WSDL or metadata file. This resource discovery mechanism is out of scope of this specification. </quote> > Issue 334-jk: Added Para [277a] -I believe this needs a little bit more work Your text: <quote> Clients and Responders MAY useKeyNamefor HMAC validation. Alternatively, they may use Identity or other information derived from security binding. </quote> Some changes and typo corrections: <quote> Clients and Responders MAY use dsig:KeyName for HMAC validation. Alternatively, they may use other information derived from security binding, such as the sender's IP address. </quote> Comments? -jose
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