Re: Issue 328-jk: Unclear security bindings section

Hi Shivaram,

Thanks for all this work.

In the able just above Part II, [72], there are some rows that have no
value for the new column "Authentication Mode". Does this mean it is not
applicable?

I think that you mean to call this column "Client Authentication Mode"
and say "Not Applicable" or put some "-----" in those empty cells.

[ Optionally, could it be possible to add a par. number to that table,
for example at the Client Authentication Modes: line? Everyone liked
those par. numbers so we've decided to keep them all throughout and
publish the spec with them]

In the table under [72], I get confused by the name "XKMS element". I'm
not sure if this refers to an element described in the XKMS XML Schema
or to an XKMS protocol element or ... maybe changing the name could make
it clearer.

The table under [74] also has some empty cells under Client
Authentication Mode (no typo this time) that could benefit from having a
"non applicable" or "----" content.

The table under [75] also uses "XKMS element". See my comment above.

The rest of your changes have indeed made this section clearer.
Many thanks!

-jose

Received on Tuesday, 1 March 2005 21:42:23 UTC