RE: last call - comments

his message is in reply to issue #310 [1] that you raised during the XKMS
WG Last Call request.

The changes you proposed to the specification have been acted on as follows
and the revised version of the specification may be seen at [2]

Fixed

At this point the work group believes all concerns raised in issue #310 have
been addressed, unless we hear otherwise. (see [3] for additional
resolutions)

The XKMS WG would like to thank you for reviewing and commenting on the
draft XKMS specification.

Regards, 
Phillip Hallam-Baker on behalf of the XKMS WG
VeriSign Inc.

[1] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-xkms/2003Apr/0030.html
[2] http://www.w3.org/2001/XKMS/Drafts/XKMS20030804/xkms-part-1.html
    http://www.w3.org/2001/XKMS/Drafts/XKMS20030804/xkms-part-2.html
[3] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-xkms/2003Aug/0005.html


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Shivaram Mysore [mailto:Shivaram.Mysore@Sun.COM]
> Sent: Friday, April 18, 2003 6:41 PM
> To: pbaker@verisign.com
> Cc: www-xkms@w3.org
> Subject: last call - comments
> 
> 
> A few editorial comments:
> 
> http://www.w3.org/TR/xkms2/
> 
> Just before line 386,
> 
> Appendix DReferences -- TYPO; Need Space in between D & References
> 
> [CSP] TBD  -- FILL-IN HERE !!
> 
> 
> http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/WD-xkms2-bindings-20030418/Overview.html
> 
> Just before line 75, 
> 
> [PKIX]  TDB -- FILL-IN HERE !!
> 
> [SPKI] TDB  -- FILL-IN HERE !!
> 
> also make items in [] bold  to be consistent.
> 
> line 80 will need a hard reference soon.
> 
> just before line 84 another item [XML-ns] that needs to be in bold.
> 
> /Shivaram
> 
> 
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> > Date: Fri, 18 Apr 2003 14:46:46 -0700 (PDT)
> > From: Shivaram Mysore <Shivaram.Mysore@sun.com>
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> > Subject: XKMS in last call mode
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> > The document address is:
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> >   http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/WD-xkms2-20030418/Overview.html
> >   http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/WD-xkms2-bindings-20030418/Overview.html
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> > The Last Call review period will end on 23 May, 2003. 
> Please send review 
> > comments by that date to the editor - pbaker@verisign.com and cc: 
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> > 
> > Thank you,
> > 
> > /Shivaram Mysore
> > Co-Chair, W3C XKMS WG
> > 
> ______________________________________________________________
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> > Shivaram H. Mysore <shivaram.mysore@sun.com>
> > 
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Shivaram H. Mysore <shivaram.mysore@sun.com>

Software Engineer 				Co-Chair, W3C's XKMS WG	
Java Card Engineering				http://www.w3.org/2001/XKMS
JavaSoft, Sun Microsystems Inc.	

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