last call - comments

A few editorial comments:

http://www.w3.org/TR/xkms2/

Just before line 386,

Appendix DReferences -- TYPO; Need Space in between D & References

[CSP] TBD  -- FILL-IN HERE !!


http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/WD-xkms2-bindings-20030418/Overview.html

Just before line 75, 

[PKIX]  TDB -- FILL-IN HERE !!

[SPKI] TDB  -- FILL-IN HERE !!

also make items in [] bold  to be consistent.

line 80 will need a hard reference soon.

just before line 84 another item [XML-ns] that needs to be in bold.

/Shivaram


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___________________________________________________________________________
Shivaram H. Mysore <shivaram.mysore@sun.com>

Software Engineer 				Co-Chair, W3C's XKMS WG	
Java Card Engineering				http://www.w3.org/2001/XKMS
JavaSoft, Sun Microsystems Inc.	

Direct: (408)276-7524
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