- From: Hallam-Baker, Phillip <pbaker@verisign.com>
- Date: Wed, 6 Aug 2003 07:41:03 -0700
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Received on Wednesday, 6 August 2003 10:41:04 UTC
303 Denis Pinkas: 8.
The two overviews from sections 1.5 and 1.6 do not provide a clear
picture of the functions that are supported. They should be both revised.> A
text is proposed as an annex at the end of these comments.
Resolution - Editorial - some text to be merged
On this one I found myself thinking that the intro could perhaps be improved
BUT I think the proposals made by Denis are somewhat clearer in some
respects but are also wrong.
So basically I think we can move ahead without making changes here unless
someone wants to volunteer to do a rewrite.
Phill
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