Comments from WS-A on WSDL 2.0 documents

These are the comments I have on the WSDL 2.0 Primer, per the request
that the WS-Addressing WG review the WSDL 2.0 documents
 
1. Typos: 
 a. section 2.3 third para, first line: "either imported nor inlined"
should be "either imported or inlined". 

 b. section 2.4.4.1 last para under third bullet "provides examples for
the URI style and Multipart style" should be "provides examples for the
IRI style and Multipart style" 

 c. section 5.1 second para: "The context that a Web service may be
deployed" should probably be: "The context in which a Web service may be
deployed". 

2. Section 5.3 contains repeated use of the term "endpoint reference" in
a sense which is not a WS-A EPR. It would be wise, particularly given
the references in 5.2 to WS-A, to make it very clear that the endpoint
reference described in 5.3 is not an End Point Reference. Or maybe a
different term would be better? Something like "endpoint URL" perhaps? 

3. WS Addressing is not included in the References, despite being
mentioned in section 5.2. 


 
Tony Rogers
Computer Associates
Senior Architect
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