- From: Lawrence Mandel <lmandel@ca.ibm.com>
- Date: Fri, 26 Nov 2004 14:36:30 -0500
- To: www-ws-desc@w3.org
- Message-ID: <OFDCFCB0FC.752DC6A7-ON85256F58.0069212B-85256F58.006BB644@ca.ibm.com>
Hello working group, I just read through the WSDL primer. First off, congratulations. This document (although not yet complete) provides a nice overview of WSDL 2.0. I found some typos while reading through the primer. I'm listing them here in case they haven't yet been found and fixed. Section 1.3 -"This document uses several XML namespaces, some of which are defined by standars..." should read "...defined by standards..." Section 2.1 -The first sentence of the 5th paragraph is an incomplete sentence. "We begin by writing a WSDL 2.0 document to describe a Web service that initially provides only the." Example 2-1 -It is stated in section 2.1 that "to simplify our first example, we will implement only the CheckAvailability operation." The example contains the types for the MakeReservation operation. Is this intentional? Section 3.1 -First paragraph, second sentence. "...a requester of the service must provide a check-in date, a check-out date, and specifies the type of room..." should read "...and specify the type of room...". -Second paragraph, first sentence. A space is needed between 'decision' and 'we'. Section 3.1.1 -First paragraph, first sentence. "Let's exame..." should read "Let's examine..." Section 3.1.2 -Paragraph five, first sentence. "After look into these..." should read "After looking into these..." -Second sentence. "In addition, we also want the schema definitions be available..." should read "definitions to be available". -Third sentence. "So we writes down..." should read "So we write down..." Section 3.2 -Paragraph three, last sentence. "...and whether the message are sent..." should read either "...and whether the message is sent..." or "...and whether the messages are sent...". -Robust In-Only. Second sentence. Change "aslo" to "also". -Paragraph below In-Optional-Out. "...MEPs which sort of mirroring the..." should read "...MEPs which sort of mirror the..." -Robust Out-Only, second sentence. Change "aslo" to "also". -Second last paragraph, last sentence. "...may be used together, wherea binding..." should read "...may be used together, whereas binding...". Section 3.3 -Last paragraph, end of second sentence. Change "documents" to "document". Section 3.3.3 -Paragraph beginning with "An operation references..." Sentence "Its vaule muse match..." should read "Its value must match..." -The following sentence starts "Note thta..." and should be "Note that..." -Next paragraph, third sentence. "...interface fault with an specific..." should read "...interface fault with a specific...". -Same paragraph, last sentence. The first word needs to be capitalized. Example 3-4 -Do the outfault references need to be prefixed with tns? Section 4.1 -Paragraph beginning with "Careful readers...". The first sentence says "...some extend symmetric..." and should read "...some extent symmetric...". -Same paragraph,end of third sentence. "...different purspose." should read "...different purposes." Section 5 -First paragraph, end of the third sentence. "...service that implementing an interface is provided." should read "...service that implements an interface is provided." Thanks, Lawrence Mandel Software Developer IBM Rational Software - XML Web Services Tooling Phone: 905 - 413 - 3814 Fax: 905 - 413 - 4920 lmandel@ca.ibm.com
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