Re: Fuflillment of action item: language for circular includes

Hi Amy,

Your proposed text looks reasonable.  I have a few editorial suggestions 
though:

At 01:01 PM 12/5/2003 -0500, Amelia A Lewis wrote:
>. . .
>Proposed text:
>
>Multiple inclusion of a single WSDL document MUST be resolved to a

Change: "MUST be resolved" to "resolves".

>single set of components.  Mutual, multiple, and circular includes are
>explicitly permitted, and do not represent multiple redefinitions of the
>same components.

Insert: "Multiple inclusion of a single WSDL document has the same meaning 
as including it only once."

>Processors are encouraged to keep track of the source
>of component definitions, so that multiple, mutual, and circular
>includes do not require establishing identity component-by-component.

It might be good to move the following to the beginning of the paragraph, 
to avoid the forward reference:

>A
>mutual include is direct inclusion by one WSDL document of another WSDL
>document which includes the first.  A circular include achieves the same
>effect with greater indirection (WSDL A includes WSDL B includes WSDL A,
>for instance).

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David Booth
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Received on Thursday, 11 December 2003 10:56:54 UTC