- From: Jeffrey Schlimmer <jeffsch@windows.microsoft.com>
- Date: Tue, 23 Apr 2002 11:21:31 -0700
- To: "David Booth" <dbooth@w3.org>, "Jacek Kopecky" <jacek@systinet.com>
- Cc: <www-ws-desc@w3.org>
Thanks for your help with this. The new wording will be in the next draft. --Jeff -----Original Message----- From: David Booth [mailto:dbooth@w3.org] Sent: Thursday, April 18, 2002 2:28 PM To: Jacek Kopecky Cc: www-ws-desc@w3.org Subject: Re: New wording for R001 At 06:36 PM 4/18/2002 +0200, Jacek Kopecky wrote: > David, > I understand the Must in the square brackets as an indication >that this requirement must be fulfilled, so why not just change >that from Must Not to Must? Only for stylistic reasons. It is usually clearer and more direct to phrase things positively. Also, "must not preclude" is (almost) a double negative, which is almost always more confusing than stating the intention directly. >R001 > >[Accepted, Must, Charter] The language developed by the WG must >not preclude any programming model, nor assume any transport or >protocol for communication between peers. (Last revised 21 Feb >2002.) > > Jacek Kopecky > > Senior Architect, Systinet (formerly Idoox) > http://www.systinet.com/ > > > >On Thu, 18 Apr 2002, David Booth wrote: > > > Jeffrey, > > > > Per your action item: NEW ACTION 2002.04.18 Jeffery will clean up R001 > > > > Here is some suggested new wording for R001[1]: > > > > R001: [Accepted, Must, Charter] The language developed by the WG must > > permit any programming model, transport or protocol for communication > > between peers. (Last revised 21 Feb 2002.) > > > > [1] > > > http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-ws-desc/2002Apr/att-0104/01-ws-d esc-reqs-20020417.html > > > > David Booth > > W3C Fellow / Hewlett-Packard > > Telephone: +1.617.253.1273 > > David Booth W3C Fellow / Hewlett-Packard Telephone: +1.617.253.1273
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